雅思写作Task1之如果高级表达Change！

雅思写作Task1考试中，我们常常会遇到各种奇特的地图题目，根据题目要求，我们通常需要根据地图的变化Change进行描绘，按照地图的变化前后来做对比，提出自己的观点，那么我们如果遇到这种Change类型的地形图，应该如何去运用好语法进行正确表达呢？Nick带大家一起从例题进行探索吧。

一、高级表达物料

【高级表达】 

Revise v. 修订，修改，复习

【例句】

In the present day, the layout of the centre has been revised.

【翻译】

现在，该中心的布局已经得到了修改。

【使用解析】

“revise”日常用语对于某看法或某量的修正，也可用于对于考试的复习等情况。revise用在地图描述上可以用来形容某建筑或的确的布局、规划等得到修改。可以用来替代“change”类表示改变的词。

二、真题例题

Comparison Maps

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below shows a health centre in 2005 and in the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

三、相应范文

The maps, A and B, illustrate evidently the refurbishment of a health centre between 2005 and the present.

Overall, there have been massive changes in the health centre over the period given. It is clear that the centre has enlarged and its layout has also been changed to meet the demand.

In 2005, the main entrance was located in front of the health centre with 12 car parking spaces outside. From the main entrance, there were some seats along the hallway for clients to wait for consultation. At the end of the hallway, there was a reception desk for clients to register. In addition, an office and a consultation room were located on the left of the desk, and on its right, there were two more consultation rooms. Finally, a physiotherapy room was built behind the desk.

In the present day, the layout of the centre has been revised. The main entrance is now situated in the left corner of the centre with a reception desk and an area for children to play. Meanwhile, there is a large common area in the middle of the centre for clients where seats are available alongside the wall. All original rooms and a newly added room called the minor operations room, on the other hand, are now allocated to the common area. Finally, the size of the car park increased by twice with 30 spaces.

四、总结

遇到这种题型，我们一定要花时间去看图，根据图里面的细节来观察Change前后的变化，并且论述自己的观点，Task1部分一般150字符左右，地图A到B变化内容描述完毕，搭配上部分关键，最终进行重申论述即可。