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2021雅思5月15日Task2大作文回忆解析!

沐訫 发表于2021-05-18

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21年5月15日雅思考试机经回忆,根据考生回忆Task2大作文话题,保持健康是对自己负责还是社会负责?作为五月的第三场考试,令人庆幸的是没有再次上热搜,先前Nick预测的健康类话题倒是准确命中,本次大作文选择了社会类+健康类结合性的题材,我们应该如何去进行作答呢?

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一、雅思2021年5月15日考试原题

日期:2020.05.15

地点:大陆

纸考笔考:纸考

科目:大作文 Task2

People should take care of their health as a duty to the society, rather than their own benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 人们应该关心自己的健康,作为对社会的责任,而不是自己的利益。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?


二、解题思路

该题型于海外2020年5月出国,不过当时的描述方式不同,实则整体话题还是一样的。

People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree?


1、很多考鸭们第一眼看上去没有任何思路,实则完美可以展开新去进行思考。


保护自身健康就可以拥有更好的生活质量,寿命也就会延长,可以为社会奉献更久。


更好的健康 -> 更多精力 -> 做事更productive -> 增强个人的竞争力


2、为了duty for a society保持健康:

一些人认为健康完全是他们自己的事,与社会无关;但在许多情况下,一个不健康的人可能会对社会造成巨大的危害,例如,传染性疾病患者可能会将疾病传染给整个地区的人,有癫痫或精神疾病患者可能会损害他人。


许多生病的人会给国家的财政带来很大的压力,包括治疗费用、药品费用等;如果每个人都能提高自己的健康水平,就能省下一大笔政府预算,这部分钱可用于教育、民生等其他领域。


在这里,我建议大家最懒的写作方法就是认为两者都是equallyimportant,这样就可以省去很多关于为什么更加社会责任而不是个人原因的论证。然而,请注意,选择equally  important并不意味着没有必要进行论证,或者有一个地方可以说是equally  important,而不是简单地列出两者。


三、参考范文

It is a heated debate whether people should care about their well-being for their own benefits or for social responsibilities. I believe that both purposes are important and people should take an interest in both.

To begin with, it makes perfect sense that people take care of their health to benefit them personally. First, maintaining good health allows people to perform well in other activities, for example, playing sports, working, travelling etc. People in bad shape are limited in the range of activities they can do, such as those suffering from heart diseases are not permitted to ride a roller coaster, or those with diabetes are advised against rice consumption. Second, good health allows good appearance. WebMD reveals that people who have a balanced diet with a lot of vegetables and fruits tend to have a smooth complexion, bright eyes and healthy hair.

However, one should not disregard the responsibility of taking care of one’s self for the society’s overall wellness. One justifiable reason is that an ill person may be a threat to the bigger population when the disease is highly contagious. In particular, the outbreak of SARS in 2002 or H5N1 in 2005 started with a few misdiagnosed individuals. Moreover, unhealthy individuals can be a burden for the society and further hurt the economy. Let’s look at the spread of SARs again. The findings of Korea University and The Australian National University disclose that the total global cost of lost economic activity was 80 million USD.

In short, taking care of health is undoubtedly needed for one’s own benefits. Nonetheless, it also plays a vital role in ensuring the nation’s well-being, which confirms the social responsibility of each individual in maintaining their health.


四、总结

健康类的话题和社会类话题进行结合难度还是很大的,如果我们在前期思路无法正确理解的话,可能会造成一些误解。


在提出观点+论证的时候,考鸭们需要注重自己的核心述求,两边均进行论证,最终来证明自己的观点。

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