雅思写作Task2社会类话题解析！

沐訫发表于2021-06-02

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近两年来，社会类话题在雅思写作Task2部分时常出现，不少考生们却依旧是频频犯错，导致大规模丢分，即便是看了网上各种花里胡哨的模板套用，最终还是难以上6.5分，那么本期Nick则是从“城乡转移”这个社会学话题进行解析，带给正在备考考鸭们一些不太一样的思路。

雅思写作Task2社会类话题解析！图1

一、例题

Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities. Why has his happened? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?

许多人正从农村地区迁往大城市。为什么会发生这种情况?你认为在多大程度上这是一个好趋势?

二、话题解析

这是一个混合类型的题目，可以从why和Towhatextent看出。既问原因，也问观点。因此，回答的时候，这两个问题都要涵盖。因此，Taskresponse的分数不会降低。每个问题可以用1-2个观点回答。如果是两种观点，可以写在一段或分段。

三、范文赏析

These days many people from rural areas have chosen to migrate to cities, believing that they are more likely to find employment and enjoy a better quality of life in urban areas, but the movement of population can cause many problems.

解析：开头直接介绍背景，重申主题和表明观点(cause problem-作者认为成想转移是不好的趋势)

该类型题目需要注意，P.S混合型信息量过大，不建议过度延伸背景内容。

我们可以将开头简练为:

Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities. Why has his happened? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?

There are two main reasons why these people have made this decision. Firstly, cities are more densely populated and there are more job opportunities available, so they may earn more money. This means that they can improve living standards and afford more consumer goods than ever before. By contrast, employment opportunities are scarce in rural areas, due to the fact that many industries are underdeveloped and many inhabitants’ buying power is limited. Another advantage of urban life is that city dwellers have easy access to public services, including education and health care, and young couples who used to live in the countryside intend to send their children to urban schools to get prepared for better job opportunities in the feature.

解析：本段回答Why的问题，给出了相应的两个论点，对于每个理由进一步解析和举例论证，同时对于job opportunities这个点给予对比论证。

同义替换：

居民

inhabitants，city dwellers, young couples,

migrants, communities;

乡村 rural areas, countryside

连贯表达积累:

firstly后没有用secondly讲第二个理由, 而是用 Another advantage of…

This means that…

除了优点,本段的缺点也很明显。

语句啰嗦: due to the fact that用because代替就好了，除非你想凑字数。但我们前面说了，混合类型题目的写作信息量很大，所以这里能简练就简练。

逻辑欠缺: young couples这个例子是对education的举例,而不是和education作并列关系,所以,最好不要跟including education放在一个句子里。