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2021年5月29日,雅思再次喜提热搜,好在并不是难度太难,反而是因为“太简单”,不过还是有很多考生对于雅思5.29写作Task2部分有所疑惑,那么在本期分享中,我们将会深入去讨论一下雅思5.29写作Task2大作文的解题思路和范文分析。
Some people say that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
本期Task2属于非常明显的媒体类话题,主要内容在于社会媒体中的广告,很多考生们没有深入去思考和积累相关词汇。
1、题目大意:有人认为广告可以带来正面的经济效益,也有人认为广告让我们的生活变得不舒服,对社会有负面影响。
2、话题特点:很明显对立论点,我们需要根据双方的论点进行论证,表达出自己的观点。
3、写作思路:
开头段:引入话题、抛出争议,表达自己观点。
主体第一段:表达部分人观点、提供相关细节、给出作者对此的负面评价;
主体第二段:表达另一部分人观点、提供相关细节、给出作者对此的正面评价;
结尾段:重申主体思想,标明作者更加认同后者观点。
Billboards, leaflets and TV commercials are pervasive in everyday life that constantly expose the average person to the latest and greatest products and services in the market. While applauding their incredible effectiveness in raising public awareness, critics point out that advertising can be bad for our wellbeing, whether or not we realize it.
Some people say that advertising is essential to the economy and should be given free rein, and I can understand their point of view. Companies selling popular products probably recognize the power of repeated exposure, without which even the most cutting-edge or easy-to-use items cannot translate into substantial sales figures. Workers in related businesses would also stress the importance of product promotion, as it creates a large number of jobs from graphic design to copy editing. Such economic benefits are, in my opinion, largely irrelevant to the average consumer, so allowing the full range of adverts to occupy people’s time and attention may not be in their best interest.
There are other people who argue against advertising mainly for the sense of inadequacy it generates, a position that I can side with. Researchers warn that doubling spending on advertising would result in a significant drop in life satisfaction, a sizable consequence even when compared with bad life events like divorce and unemployment. Apart from research findings, it is common experience to watch beautifully crafted advertisements and feel anxious about not being able to afford the lifestyle presented on screen. I think this fabricated sense of inspiration and constant social comparison can do emotional harm to the average person, rendering the economic benefits insignificant in the long run.
To conclude, despite the obvious financial gains that advertising brings, its negative impacts on our psychological wellbeing can be overwhelming for society, especially in the absence of any regulation or restriction. It is therefore crucial for government authorities, manufacturers and advertising agencies to work together to maximize the economic benefits while minimizing its social costs.
1.to expose sb to sth 使…暴露于/接触…
2.to raise public awareness 提升公众意识
3.to give sth free rein 放任自由
4.the most cutting-edge or easy-to-use items 最尖端或易用的商品
5.to translate into substantial sales figures 转化为可观的销售数字
6.financial contributions 财务贡献
7.sense of inadequacy 不足感
8.life satisfaction 生活满意度
9.fabricated 编造的
10.to render sth insignificant 使…不重要
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