2021雅思写作6月5日Task2孩子成长过程的影响因素话题解析！

沐訫发表于2021-06-07

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教育是每个家庭至关重要的事情，每个孩子都是父母捧在手心里面的宝贝，在孩子的成长过程中，父母的陪伴和教育是影响终生的，在2021年6月5日的雅思写作Task2中，便提到了“孩子成长过程中的英雄因素“话题，非常贴近生活的一个主题，我们应该如何去进行描述才能拿到高分呢？

2021雅思写作6月5日Task2孩子成长过程的影响因素话题解析！图1

一、雅思2021.6.5写作Task2题目

A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?

二、解题思路

我们可以很明显分析出，这个题目属于教育类话题，我们可以运用的思路有：主体分析法，时间分段，定义法，裸奔法四种

1、可以选择从children’s development进行细化分析

儿童的良好发展方向有那些？

1、德——良好的品质（honestwarm-hearted）。

2、智——学习能力，求知欲，思辨能力，适应环境的能力，与人交际合作的能力。

3、体——良好的体魄。

4、美——审美能力，兴趣爱好。

5、劳——动手能力，工作能力。

2、从outside of home出发

孩子的成长通常会受到来自多方面的影响，除了家庭和学校的教育，还有科技发展和媒体价值观传导，甚至还会受到原生家庭的经济状况和社会地位影响。

相对于融合了媒体、社会、科技三大类的元素，我们在描绘的时候，需要着重选择一点进行延伸。

三、重点词汇和语料

multiple factors 多种因素

play an indispensable role 发挥不可或缺的作用

childhood years童年

life skills生活技能

distinguish right from wrong分辨是非

set a good example树立榜样

become valuable members of society成才

impart knowledge传授知识

in a systematic manner系统地

make progress 取得进步

role models 榜样

settle a dispute解决争论

contribute to the community为社区做贡献

parenting approach育儿方法

四、参考范文

Every child is influenced by multiple factors in his or her growth. Compared with the family, other factors from outside the home seem to have greater influence on children’s development.

Parents are considered as children's first teachers, playing an indispensable role in children’s growth, particularly in their childhood years. Parents are the first to help children to learn basic life skills and the ability to distinguish right from wrong. Children tend to imitate what their parents do and follow how their parents behave. If parents could set a good example, children would be more likely to become valuable members of society. By contrast, the wrong methods of parenting can be harmful to children’s growth.

However, after children enter school, other factors have greater influence on their development than parents do. First and foremost, teachers in school impart children knowledge of various subjects in a systematic manner so that children can make progress in academics and prepare for future careers. Teachers are also expected to be students’ role models, guiding them in behavior and correcting their mistakes. In addition, school is a wider community where children spend most of time living and studying together with their peers from different backgrounds. This experience is important in children’s growth, which teaches them how to interact positively with others, to settle a dispute and to contribute to the community.

In conclusion, parenting approaches affect children’s abilities, values and behavior, especially during pre-school years. After children start school, this influence still exists but other factors from outside of the family play a larger role in children’s development.