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2021雅思写作6月22日Task2高分范文鉴赏!

Effy 发表于2021-06-22

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2021年6月22日的雅思考试已经结束,万幸的是没有掀起什么波澜壮阔,也没有出现五月频频上热搜的情况,本次雅思考试写作Task2部分则罕见的询问了最近非常火热的航空领域,这让很多考生们猝不及防,那么本期就让我们一起来聊一聊2021雅思写作6月22日Task2高分范文鉴赏!

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一、2021.6.22雅思写作Task2原题

The spending on the development of technology of space exploration is not justifiable. They believe there are many beneficial ways to spend these money.

  Agree or disagree?

你对于政府把钱花在太空空间资源开发的事情是怎么想的。


二、话题解析

该题目的观点比较明显,讨论太空探索和太空空间资源的投入是否合理,考生们只需要选择合理或者不合理即可。


其中的关键词在于:spending, space exploration, not justified, beneficial ways


该话题的来源于中国航天实现了全新的突破,一方面完成了火星登陆采集,另一方面完成了太空空间站的基建项目部分,实现了可持续发展的空间研究站。


我们可以选择的角度有两个:


1、开支不合理,航天需要花费大量的金钱,这些金钱可以用在一些民生项目上,或者进行短期的基建投资,拿来解决地球上环境污染、生态破坏、经济危机、贫穷疾病等问题。


2、开支合理,甚至应该加强投资,航天领域对我们的国防和通讯技术提升十分关键,航空领域的领先可以让我们未来十年中取得优渥的发展地位,且可以延伸性通过航天领域到民生领域。


三、范文

Since human beings realized their power to harness nature and space, they are insatiably exploiting the outside world. However, there is a growing body of opinion that it is unjustified to invest public money in space but problems on the earth should be prioritized. I personally agree with this statement and will substantiate it in this essay.


Admittedly, outer space exploration may discover more resources and also expand human beings’ habitat in other planets, which could ensure humanity’s long term survival and wean the Earth off fossil fuels. It is acknowledged that the environment is so deteriorated that the Earth may become barren and not inhabitable any more. However, more detrimental impacts might be exerted to either individuals or the whole society. Space research, which is not a necessary but a desire, requires long term commitments and tremendous running expenses yet can not be rewarded in a short time. A wealth of information shows space shuttle disasters and how NASA failed on some of its missions risking the lives of astronauts.


On the other hand, more urgent issues on the Earth could be devoted by the authorities to benefit the whole society. In some remote areas, there still remain large numbers of people deprived of lives by poverty and famine. Compared with creating more possibilities for the future of mankind, of more significance is the government’s budgets to ameliorate the situation. Moreover, the severe environment contamination such as climate change, global warming and acrid rain would undoubtedly threaten wholesomeness of citizens without being reversed effectively. Therefore, the politicians should help alleviate poverty and improve health by curing, preventing and managing all illnesses in terms of financial support.


In conclusion, despite of some progress achieved by space research, a balance should be maintained in the governmental budgets until humans have addressed those more essential problems of the globe.


四、高分物料

      are insatiably exploiting 贪婪地开发

  be prioritized 被优先考虑

  substantiate 证实

  admittedly 确实

  deteriorated 恶化的

  barren and inhabitable 贫瘠的和不宜居的

  long term commitments 长期的努力

  tremendous running expenses 巨大的运营费用

  deprived of 剥夺

  wholesomeness of citizens 公民健康

       there is a growing body of opinion that 同位语从句

  It is acknowledged that 主语从句

  A wealth of information shows 事实举例论证

  Compared with 对比论证

  of more significance is it 倒装形式

  would undoubtedly threaten 虚拟语气



五、总结

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