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雅思7分作文素食主义题材解析!

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雅思7分作文作为真正的顶尖大佬人物,在大陆考生的水平当中,可以在写作和口语拿到七分,平均分基本上都在7.5分左右,那么今天Nick则是从网络上带来了一篇素食主义题材的雅思7分作文,带大家一起去进行鉴赏,如果运用好独特的思路来写出高分作文!快来看看吧。

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一、例子

观点类大作文,健康类话题


Everybody should become a vegetarian because we do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent you agree or disagree?


题目来源:2015年9月19日大陆雅思大作文


题目解析:

常见的健康话题,更加偏向于观点类作文,素食主义和肉食主义一直都是对立面,但是他们之间却有一些相互点,我们应该从两方面进行讨论。

一般情况建议,先从素食主义的好处来看,诸如水果蔬菜蕴含的维生素,植物蛋白等营养物资,可以避免过多脂肪和热量摄入,保证身材。

其次第二步在选择关键进行反驳,人毕竟是杂食动物,吃肉作为天性,如果长期缺肉类也会出现一些心理上的缺失。

第三步,素食固然是纯天然健康的,但是单纯吃素食未必一定是健康的,减少肉食摄入和其他食品摄入可能会导致体内微量元素失衡。

第五步,从经济角度出发,部分地区发展落后,单纯素食主义反而会导致生活拮据。


高分作文案例:

It is sometimes argued that a healthy diet does not necessarily consist of meat, so we should all become vegetarians. Although a vegetarian diet can certainly benefit the human body in a range of different ways, I disagree with the view that it is the appropriate choice of diet for everyone.


On the one hand, it is undeniable that there are documented health and social benefits to a vegan diet. Since a vegan diet is plant-based, it would be easier for vegetarians to load up on healthy whole grains, fruits, and vegetables that many people on regular diets lack. Furthermore, there is evidence supporting that a vegetarian diet also lowers the risk of heart disease. More importantly, another reason why a lot of vegetarians argue that we should all adopt a meat-free diet is that killing animals for food is unethical. Especially because raising animals in confinement for slaughter is cruel, and many animals are not slaughtered humanely.


In spite of the above arguments, I would argue that those who are not willing to become vegetarian should not be forced to do so. Firstly, eating meat is nothing but natural as humans are omnivores and have evolved to consume even more meat. Vegetarians mistakenly elevate the value of animal life over plant life. Research shows that plants also respond electrochemically to threats, so it is safe to say that eating meat is no more cruel or unethical than eating vegetables. Secondly, there is evidence showing that raising beef is often the most efficient way to produce food for humans, which means that eating meat might be the optimal solution to famine release in certain developing countries eroded by poverty.


In conclusion, it is my belief that people have the right to choose for themselves which diet to adopt.


二、素食主义题材相关话题词汇

vegetarian  素食主义者

vegan diet  纯素饮食

lower the risk of heart disease  降低患心脏病的风险

unethical  不道德的

raising animals in confinement  圈养动物

be forced to do so  被迫这样做

research shows  研究表明

o more cruel or unethical than  比…更残忍或更不道德


三、总结

这两年因为环境保护的逐步重视,越来越多的素食主义开始站出来说话,相关的话题和观点层出不穷,我们需要注意记录,极有可能遭遇。

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